These days due to the technological improvement we have been witnessing, home office has made it into our daily life. Many companies around the world offer this opportunity that, according to the latest studies, is widely well accepted among employees. This essay will revolve around the pros and the cons of this policy.
Working from home has become commonplace these days. In the past that would have been more complicated, if not impossible. Computers were too expensive, Internet connections unreliable and slow. Since then technology has moved forward making it possible for almost everyone to get a notebook and to have a stable and fast access to the Web. Companies have observed also that employees who work remotely are actually more productive than colleagues who work in the office. Beside boosting productivity, home office is an effective way to cut on management cost. Companies have to rent spaces for their offices, to pay bills for electricity, water and heating. Allowing employees to work remotely is also a smart solution to curb expenses. Another positive aspect worth mentioning is that working from home can be more relaxing than spending time in a busy, noisy office. At home workers do not have to follow strict schedules or dead lines. They can better focus on their goals and reach higher levels of productivity in the light of the fact that they are surrounded by a favorable environment. Finally, the financial aspect should also be taken into account. Since people do not have to leave home, they can save a lot of money and time that they normally would waste on car insurance, gas, parking tickets and traffic jams.
Although the facts mentioned above give a rather bright picture of homeworking, many claim that is practice has its own drawbacks. For example, they think that some skills like team working and problem solving get lost. Those abilities are requested by many employers and working without interaction can actually weaken those abilities which are essential in many fields. Others do not believe that productivity increases given that employees cannot be controlled and it is not possible to give direct feedback on their job.
To sum up, from my point of view, home working is a smart solution that merges benefits for the employees as well as for the companies. It is a win-win situation where employees can work from a friendly environment and companies profit from higher productivity and revenues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun claim seems to be countable; consider using: 'many claims'.
Suggestion: many claims
...a rather bright picture of homeworking, many claim that is practice has its own drawbacks....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, if, so, then, well, as for, for example, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07407407407 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67461777585 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575308641975 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1570267361 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4090909091 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4090909091 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95454545455 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301896695982 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766345792314 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056120126198 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153583899719 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661538041112 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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