Advantages and disadvantages in our life
Nowadays, thanks to the recent advance in technological devices, human communication become easier than before. People can keep in touch with each other through mobile phone instead of sending letter. No one can deny that mobile phone is a useful means of communication in our life. However, generally, it has both advantages and disadvantages sides.
On the one hand, mobile phone has a lot of advantages.Firstly, it the fastest way to communicate. It takes us only few minutes to connect with other by making phone call or sending a huge amount of messages. Therefore, staying in touch with others from different cities or even countries becomes easier. Secondly, it is also a way to stop boredom. People can install games or some informative apps to read news, books or magazines, which helps them release stress. It is not only helps us to connect with others but also gives us an entertainment.Lastly, it is a highly portable device that easy to bring. We can bring it wherever we go without worry about its weight as well as connection as telephone.
On the negative aspects, mobile phone has some drawbacks. First of all, it can isolate us from people around us. It is true that cell phones help people connect with the world, but if it not used carefully, it can isolate us from our friends,relatives or family. For example, we usually meet many groups of youths seated around table but not taking to each other, all of them are glued to their phone screens.Another negative side is health problems. Many teenagers or children are addicted to chats or games, they spend so much time using digital phone even they often do it at night when lack of light, which may lead to eye disease. Moreover, affecting to academic performance is also one of a negative sides of digital phone.
In conclusion, a mobile phone is a wonderful invention plays a crucial role in our daily life. These were the advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones. In the end, it all depends on our usage. Cell phones are the most personal device to us and we should make an optimal use of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76454293629 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88325068126 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567867036011 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7275300515 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9047619048 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1904761905 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90476190476 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139092278196 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515142042349 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895545030806 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129438812115 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12238474123 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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