When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country. Others prefer to keep their own customs. Compare these two choices. Which one do you prefer? Support your answer with specific details.
Nowadays, it is universal that people move to other countries easier than before. When travelling to new country, some of them decide to follow the custom of the new country. Others prefer to keep their own customs although keeping own customs is great and it represents our respect for their countries, but I think that we ought to adapt to the new custom so that we can understand about new culture,adapt to the new life easier and it can avoid understanding between different culture.
First of all, we should follow the custom to understand the new culture. First of all, we should learn the language of the country where we wish to travel. Our life will be difficult if we only know our language. Language is a mean of communication which helps us find the address, understand the signs. Knowing new language, we can communicate with native speaker, which give us a chance to widen our knowledge about traditional food, clothes or something special about their custom.
The second advantage of following the custom of the country is that it makes our life in other country become easier. We move to the new place which is different from ours about language,habits, food and clothes. It is not easy for us to find our traditional food in new countries, so adapting to new custom will help us live in new environment easily . For example, when visiting Korea , we are suggested to enjoy bimbimbap, gimbap, tobboki or try wearing kimono of this country that is one of the interesting activities. After turning back to our countries, we can share our experience with our friends or family
Finally, following the custom of the new country in order to prevent us from misunderstanding. Almost culture of one country is distinguish with others , so it is inevitable to avoid misapprehending. For instance, in many countries around the world consisting of Japan, Korea , we should take our shoes off before entering their house. Another example is thumb finger up. We usually consider that it is an action that express that agreement or like on facebook, but in some place as Iran that is offensive to them.
In conclusion, when moving to other country, we ought to follow the custom of it . It is a good idea which prevent us from cultural sock and adapt to new place easily.Understand about culture, live easily in new place and avoid misunderstanding are some benefit of following the custom of new country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84951456311 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86901768416 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468446601942 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2577048421 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.157894737 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6842105263 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309492695468 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111141867891 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694067301764 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205294047722 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770393498483 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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