When people move to another country, some of them decide to allow the customs of the new country. Others prefer to keep their own customs. Compare these two choices. Which one do you prefer? Why?
Due to globalization, we are facing an increase in immigration, especially from countries with strong historical traditions to modern countries. Some are arguing that immigrant should adopt the host country’s customs, while other believe that a person should honor their native customs no matter whey they are living. In this essay, I shall discuss both views and will explain why I am in favor of the first idea.
On the one hand, people who choose to keep their home traditions, are growing the idea that everyone should respect their home country's traditions and the customs which have been kept by their ancestors, otherwise they will lose their national identity. For instance, people of the same origin tend to live in the same area in the new country as it is more simple to keep their home country way of living in that case. They also may incorporate the idea that they have the responsibility of showcasing their rich culture to the new country, which is a common idea among those countries that are not well known.
On the other hand, adopting new traditions will have some benefits too. Those who decide to merge into their new country’s customs, tend to adapt to the new hometown faster and easier. They are believing that every community and culture has something to offer and if they are living among those cultural traditions, it is more beneficial to follow those customs. Those with this way of thinking are usually felt less homesick and could be more successful in less time due to their angle.
In my opinion, People should respect their new host country's customs while they are keeping their own traditions as well. This will allow them to enjoy both worlds which is crucial to be a successful immigrant.
To conclude, Although there are benefits in both merging to the new country’s traditions and keeping the customs which are held by our ancestors, those who find a balance to honor both are choosing a better prospect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...he new hometown faster and easier. They are believing that every community and culture has so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89489489489 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52506307071 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501501501502 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.406605152 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.384615385 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280827105625 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107554130286 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721241910342 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17292923677 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602958666036 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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