The advantages of living in a small town (150 words)
Living in a small town brings many advantages to countryside dwellers. First of all, the environment is quite favorable for people' health. To take tree as an example, the greenery help people reduce strain. Besides, the ecosystem has less contamination that brings a variety of fresh food for local community. Secondly, the traffic congestion is not a huge problem. For example, the jobs are in the town so that people can go to the office in a short time. In addition, the less population the town has, the less vehicles are used. Lastly living cost in the minimal community is much lower than that in the big city. Farmers can provide vegetables and fruits themselves. Furthermore, most people possess own houses without paying for rent. In addition, almost things are cheaper than these in the city, such as clothes, groceries… , but their qualities are nearly the same. All in all, living in a small town has many benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 509, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun vehicles is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
..., the less population the town has, the less vehicles are used. Lastly living cost i...
^^^^
Line 1, column 833, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n the city, such as clothes, groceries… , but their qualities are nearly the same...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 158.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87974683544 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64738788847 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632911392405 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.6917753088 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.25 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1666666667 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198138912341 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731889216307 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124807694687 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198138912341 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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