Air travel only the richest people . The majority of people get no advantage from development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
From my everyday experience and observation, I will analyze whether people of different classes can get benefits of travelling by air considering the fact of mass development in aviation industry. I am surprise to see that people think that air travelling can only by afforded by rich people. I do not agree with this statement. The causes of my disagreement are that airlines have initiated the concept of satisfying all groups of people. And many airlines launch schemes of availing various packages on different festivals. Let us take a more detailed view at the reasons of my differential views.
From last many decades, airlines have introduced the concept of category system in which all group of people can be facilitated. For example, wealthy people pay extra premium to avail excellent services of the airlines. These people are referred as business class group. Second category lies after the business class is upper economy class. They also pay extra to receive additional benefits. Third category is economy class in which middle-class people can gain advantage of lowest rates. They may not get as extra care as these two categories above get, but, can enjoy the air travelling. Hence, every type of people are entertained by the airline industries.
Secondly, many air travelling companies provide different packages on various festivals. For instance, Emirates Airlines introduce lowest rate packages on Eid festivals every year. Further, western airlines give great deals on airfares on Christmas eve. These people wait all year along to get the benefits of bottom rates. In addition to that, most airlines throw different deals to entice customers to choose their airlines for travelling while giving away the off-season lowest rates. This sort of deals give opportunity to those people who cannot afford to travel by plane with normal tariffs.
At the conclusion of my essay, I do not support the opinion that air industries do not cater lower-class people. All sort of groups can enjoy the air travelling with the increasing development in aviation industry. Airline companies are continuously striving for growth and enabling people to travel more frequently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, while, for example, for instance, in addition, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29022988506 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7606837951 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540229885057 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.528638014 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0434782609 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1304347826 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78260869565 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288313010534 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836883007155 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727143799254 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195032701561 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527226639718 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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