All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them Do you agree or disagree

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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

It is opine that government should discourage citizens to use all transport means that emit dangerous gases and usage of e -cars should be promoted.
There are so many disadvantages of using cars that use petrol. I believe that people should use eco friendly cars. Before reaching to an appropriate conclusion all reasons are discussed.

To begin with, all vehicles have negative impact on environment. These automobiles release carbon dioxide gas in atmosphere and increase pollution. All nations are suffering from different types of pollution problems due to increasing number of motors. The noise pollution and health problems are common .Recently studies show the detrimental effect of motors on environment which has led to health diseases in metro cities.

Moreover, The oil used in two wheelers is very costly.Due to increasing demand of fuels the rate always remains high. In Some developing countries the rate is so high that people has stopped using cars. Recently In North America majority of the citizens have started using e- motors.

To conclude, due to the increasing global warming problems there is immediate need of electronic cars. Government should start new programmes to promote these eco-friendly transport means.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52577319588 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80715421445 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649484536082 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6463109711 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4615384615 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146579395784 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494183120868 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673508494946 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950927437582 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882026603496 0.056905535591 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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