All inventions and discoveries like the discovery of fire and electricity have impacts on our
lives so much so that people can no longer live without them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the new inventions and discoveries such as fire and electricity, made the life of humans easier and now it
is difficult to survive without them. I strongly agree with this notion.
To begin with, there are several benefits with the new inventions and discoveries in science which has made human
life much easier. First of all, fire was the first form of energy that humans discovered. Needless to say, humans
learnt to survive in colder climates with the discovery of fire as keeping themselves warm was practical now. Furthermore,
after survival, humans could focus on development in other spheres of life. Using fire for other purposes, ultimately
led to the discovery of machines. Therefore, this discovery revolutionised the life of people. For instance, different
machines increased the production of industries such as food and textile which are the basic necessity of public.
Similarly, with the introduction of electricity in humans life, salutary of lifestyle was witnessed. Electricity
is the basic modern form of energy without which life may come to a stop. Moreover, it is the primary source of
power for any appliance in home. Also, electricity has improved the efficiencies of machineries resulting in a
higher production in industries and generating huge revenues. It can be proved from the fact that countries which are
facing electricity shortages have a decrease in growth of GDP. For example, electricity shortages incurred heavy
losses on industries, thus reducing their production. As well as, investors have stopped further investment in Pakistan
putting strain on its economy.
In conclusion, the development in the fields of science has raised the standard of humans life and it might be difficult
to survive in this time without these basic facilities
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ficiencies of machineries resulting in a higher production in industries and gene...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40492957746 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93481004462 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552816901408 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0882233089 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2941176471 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1764705882 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160998887063 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527720894238 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422907071806 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.050524873649 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381804629595 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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