All the people in a company should be treated equally and provided with the same number of holidays in a year or people doing different jobs enjoy different amount of holiday time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many employees have complaints regarding the differentiation in the amount of holidays that people receives, even though they are working for the same company. Some folks feel that everyone must get similar amount of holidays and should be treated equally. In my opinion, I do not agree with this fact and feel each department have different responsibilities and pressures, accordingly their holidays should also vary. In the following paragraphs, I will try to elaborate my viewpoint.
If we take into consideration an example of an institute like a School, wherein one finds various professionals working under the same roof, for instance; the teachers, an IT expert, the Human resource people, the administrators, the receptionists, the helpers and the cleaners. In such a scenario, everyone’s tasks are different, a teacher's prime objective is to teach the students, in their absence or during the holidays (weekend, summer break, etc.), he or she is not required to be in the premises.
However, this is not the case with the other employees working in the school, like the Human resource department or the Admin faculty. Their work is not affected by the availability of the students in the school, as they mainly do the back office work.
Even though I do agree, that holidays must be given in accordance to the kind of jobs that people engage in, but at the same time there should be some consideration taken into account by the authorities when deciding on the days off for the employees. For example, as previously mentioned, in a school environment even cleaners and helpers have the right to get off from work during the summer or the winter breaks. The management should try to find out a solution that could keep everyone happy and be beneficial for the overall staff.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
... same roof, for instance; the teachers, an IT expert, the Human resource people, the ...
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Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a teacher' or simply 'teachers'?
Suggestion: a teacher; teachers
...o, everyone's tasks are different, a teachers prime objective is to teach the student...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as they mainly do the back office work. Even though I do agree, that holidays mu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, regarding, so, for example, for instance, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03020134228 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96563998061 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553691275168 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0648361111 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.272727273 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230680750971 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833962902752 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796259336369 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130874988509 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948449686984 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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