All the people in a company should be treated equally and provided with the same number of holidays in a year or people doing different jobs enjoy different amount of holiday time To what extent do you agree or disagree

There are hundreds of employees in medium and big sized companies and correspondingly all of them are not doing same job. In such situation a question like “Should all of them be provided with same number of holidays or not” appears. I share similar views with people who agrees all employees in the company should have same number of holidays.

In my opinion equality is one of the most important things in the company. If boss does not treat all workers same, it can damage them mentally, create jealousy among workers, broke their relationship. Then, however, they have to work for money, they will work unwillingly and with lower productivity. Corporation should avoid it for not losing money.

Additionally, It doesn’t matter what work employees do, every human needs recharging their batteries once a while, in other words people need holidays for relaxation, clearing mind and getting rid of work stress. A tired workforce will lead to slower productivity, a lower quality of work, and a negative attitude that damages employee engagement.

Furthermore, determining and controlling diverse holiday days for separate groups of workers can be hard for company. A quite complicated and complex structure will be needed for this planning.
Taking into consideration the productivity of employees in equal work atmosphere and easier planning for company I would agree with the idea of all workers in the company should have same number of holidays.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, then, while, in my opinion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25106382979 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86068873934 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621276595745 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8996416712 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.833333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279215828017 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102019806137 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875637238768 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153960092471 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111584317557 0.056905535591 196% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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