Alternative sources that use the natural power of wind, waves, and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil, and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is supposed by many that alternative sources of energy might solve the climate change problem, which humanity is facing now due to all-time high levels of the greenhouse effect. Others believe that doing such a thing is too troublesome and will affect their bills much more than it has been prognosed. Regarding whether the replacement of old energy sources is cost-effective or not, both sides of the argument will be discussed further.
On one hand, it is hard to argue that the replacement of fossil fuels, main producers of CO2, is going to be challenging as installation of solar panels, windmills, and building hydroelectric power stations is expensive. As an example, replacing necessary details in solar panels might not only cost twice as much as if it was with the regular heating system but also it might take longer time to receive this equipment simply because of its rarity.
Conversely, if we calculate all expenditures in the long-run perspective then it will be clear that electricity will essentially become almost free and with rising popularity, it will be easier to keep maintenance of such equipment at the low-cost. Furthermore, ‘green energy’ does not pollute as much, and have less of a negative impact on environmental contamination. However, not every city or region is suitable for such change as some places have extended winter times or simply lack access to the water and wind. In this case, nuclear power might act as a more practical solution to the issue.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that switch to greener options of energy production needs to happen soon as the entire human race is at the face of distinction. And, in my opinion, the best way to acquire it is to choose power sources according to the weather of the area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 222, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to power'
Suggestion: to power
...the best way to acquire it is to choose power sources according to the weather of the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, then, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00334448161 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89080089084 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628762541806 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6379141267 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102416769109 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382076581179 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0260990078256 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583330457112 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00986971022495 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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