Obesity is now a major epidemic in North America. What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem?
Recent statistics have revealed that the number of people suffering from obesity in North America doubled in the past three years. This essay will discuss multiple causes and effects as well as will introduce possible solutions to such a worrying trend that looks set to continue.
It is almost universally accepted that obesity is the consequence of the number of factors such as a sedentary lifestyle, poor diet and last but not least lack of exercising. For example, last research from Harvard University has shown that easy access to fast-food and limited availability of gym or sports complexes in the neighborhood undeniably affects the decision-making process towards less healthy options and leads to dramatic weight gain. It was established that most of the respondents managed to get an extra ten to forty pounds after only the first two months of moving into the area.
All of this leads not only to changes in looks but also affects multiple aspects of the person’s life. For example, besides commonly obesity-related health issues such as heart diseases, high blood pressure, and insomnia, people start to suffer from depression, a sense of isolation and loneliness, increasing self-doubt. No one can argue with the fact that society also starts to articulate negative messages towards overweight people, which ads more stressors to their existence as well.
It seems clear that in order to solve this issue the government needs to be involved. With financial support from it, more programs that are built to use preventive techniques against obesity radical changes can be made. Those programs should include more resources about the horrific consequences of the uncontrollable weight-gain the same as it should encourage people to do more physical activities and follow a well-balanced diet. Moreover, health institutions should invest more towards psychological support and therapy for people who joined the journey of weight-loss so they would not relapse back to life-threating habits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...ntary lifestyle, poor diet and last but not least lack of exercising. For example, last r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, well, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41455696203 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93047543382 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645569620253 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2507600827 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.583333333 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119288095274 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431321275683 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408049185307 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684010427871 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319882368186 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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