You would like to attend a training course. Write a letter to your company manager. In your letter, you should say:
· why you would like to attend this course?
· why it would be beneficial for you and the company?
· suggest how to arrange time for it.
Dear Mr. Simons,
I am writing to you regarding the integrated marketing management crash course, which was offered to me by Harvard Business School.
They have genuinely offered a twenty percent discount to me as a recent graduate and I would love to take the opportunity and ask you to grant me two days off work on the last week of October to join the program. In this case, I will be able to finish all the reports on time.
As you may know, I have exceeded the company's expectations in achieving all deliverables in the past three months. Hence, I strongly believe that part of the reason we were able to raise recent sales numbers was the knowledge I have gained and used after successful completion of the SEO course with Google.
Moreover, I strongly believe that learning more about how to apply integrated marketing to our goals will improve the company's overall performance. Therefore, my further education in this field will beneficial to the company as well.
Please let me know what you think about this.
Kind Regards,
Rick Wellington.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95604395604 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6570067408 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664835164835 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.7297189639 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.222222222 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 4.34317383033 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186621001084 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069827363053 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395572925862 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990299333724 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162269028611 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.