although more and more people read news on the internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, growing interest is so convenient for people always read news. However, some people suppose that newspaper will continue as the major source of news. I completely disagree with this view.
One the one hand, there are variety advantage of reading on interest. Firstly, the Interest is able to provide up -to- the- minute news as it happens. As long as you have a smartphone or laptop , you can connect almost instantly to the interest, surf website and access the news to enjoy. Secondly, more and more people read on internet make press agency focus on development version online than printed edition like in the past. Thus, i think that news source in there will more diverse than newspaper.
Conversely, newspaper have drawbacks which make reader feel unfavorable. Most Important reason, this is cost to have a newspaper. if you have not money you can't buy a newspaper that mean nothing news for you. But , reading on Interest is totally free and easily access a lot of information ever day. Moreover, when reading new have to carry them, it is so redundant. Finally , I realise that reduce printed editor contribute to protect environment. Evidence to demonstrate this is cutting trees and transporting to conduct paper, so environment is affected.
In conclusion, i would argue that newspapers will continue to decline in importance and I believed that reading on Internet will prevalent.
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Comments
Nowadays, growing interest…
Nowadays, growing interest is so convenient for people always read news. However, some people suppose that newspaper will continue as the major source of news. I completely disagree with this view.
One the one hand, there are variety advantage of reading on interest. Firstly, the Interest is able to provide up -to- the- minute news as it happens. As long as you have a smartphone or laptop, you can connect almost instantly to the interest, surf website and access the news to enjoy. There are much information from difference, you can choice whatever you want. Secondly, more and more people read on internet make press agency focus on development version online than printed edition like in the past. Thus, I think that news source in internet will more diverse than newspapers and reading online is set to become trend, especially youth now
Conversely, newspaper have drawbacks which make reader feel unfavorable. Most Important reason, this is cost to have a newspaper. if you have not money you can't buy a newspaper that mean nothing news for you. But, reading on Interest is totally free and easily access a lot of information ever day. Moreover, when reading new have to carry them, it is so redundant. Finally, I realise that reduce printed editor contribute to protect environment. Evidence to demonstrate this is cutting trees and transporting to conduct paper, so environment is affected.
In conclusion, i would argue that newspapers will continue to decline in importance and I believed that reading on Internet will prevalent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... long as you have a smartphone or laptop , you can connect almost instantly to the...
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Line 2, column 436, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...printed edition like in the past. Thus, i think that news source in there will mo...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ason, this is cost to have a newspaper. if you have not money you cant buy a newsp...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... a newspaper. if you have not money you cant buy a newspaper that mean nothing news ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...aper that mean nothing news for you. But , reading on Interest is totally free and...
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Suggestion: ,
... carry them, it is so redundant. Finally , I realise that reduce printed editor co...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...uce printed editor contribute to protect environment. Evidence to demonstrate thi...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...vironment is affected. In conclusion, i would argue that newspapers will contin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07359307359 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74089917863 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0343950126 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.25 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4375 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406511360888 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111903859191 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896394081092 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237623503391 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653633470944 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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