prison is the common way most in countries to solve problem of crime . However , more effective solution is to provide with better education. Agree or disagree.
All most people suppose that we should pick up crime in prison and this is the best way to them do not make danger for society. Beside that, some people think that education is better solution but, I completely with this opinion
One the one hand, there are many reason why offenders are put in jail. Crimes who always create danger for public, that is stolen, killers, murderess, So we need method to punish them. I think that prison which is solution to reduce crimes rate it is enough to deterrent them . Especially, Murderess or killers if it freedom, life of people will be feel threaten and un-security by bad behavior of them. Moreover, prison where offenders will live isolated with society and they are controlled by policies until released . Therefore, we can prevent to commits a crime, our society will more civilized and develop.
One other hand, education can be choose complementary role to play. Proven science point out that children are taught good teaching since innate will commits a crime less than children are not teaching by their parent. Thus, parent should conduct their kids and orient them avoid violating the law. The school have to encourage students create useful for public and have subjects related laws in order to educate them. However, I think that this is suit for teenager who can easily teach, adult people not still efficiently.
I believe that prison sentences are one esstential weapon in the fight against crime, and I disagree that providing better education alone is more effective solution to reduce the crime rate.
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Suggestion: commit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94296577947 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39289323963 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61216730038 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0891625875 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220787934514 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745095839844 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888378117393 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169061570501 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113981765991 0.056905535591 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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