Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Everybody wants to become famous in the field of their interest. But nothing comes for free, similarly, there are certain unavoidable circumstances for being famous. Many times, established people are considered as role model by most of the youngsters. undoubtedly, this increases the moral responsibilities of the celebrities.
Whatever the reason could be, but if these famous people appears to be running off their duty then people start criticizing them, Specially, the persons from media. Many of the established personalities complain about this behavior of media and they have to enter into argument with them. Considering the example of Mr Amir khan, who has given great inspirational movies to the Indian cinema, when he unknowingly became a part of controversy for giving a statement about the flaws of Indian education system. No sooner had he kept his viewpoint then the people from media had asked him to leave the country. In my opinion in democracy everyone has right to speak so he did not do anything wrong by giving any statement on education system . I think this not fair for media to over react and give the unfair treatment to popular people.
As far as, the privacy of one's life is considered, no one has the right to poke into life of anybody. People must feel proud about their country's famous people. Most of the followers of these people are always desperate to have a chance to meet their ideal but sometime they ruin their as well as other's chance to have an interaction with celebrity. This certainly mess up the whole management for such events. On the other side people are always very curious to know about everyday routine of famous people so i think celebrities also need to be patient with their followers and let them feel comfortable around themselves. In simple words, no one likes spoil their personal time for other but in case of celebrities it is bit difficult to manage between their personal and professional preferences. To become famous is entirely the outcome of hard work ,media people must reward famous people wisely.
At the end to summarize my views, i would say that it has always been ways two way communication between celebrities and media personal. NO one should misuse it rather it is relationship that must be well maintained so as to enjoy it to the fullest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, then, well, as to, i think, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90862944162 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74848110302 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571065989848 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4631967625 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.789473684 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7368421053 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282289280205 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079195877361 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536838638318 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146369685555 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746284731094 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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