Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.
Why do you think this is?
What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?
There were times, when Art used to depict the cultural heritage for every country in the world. With the rapid and dramatic shift in science, technology and business, there are colossal shifts in the people interest away from art and inclination has been continuously declining in this area. Art is, somehow, losing its charm as a lucrative career option.
There are several factors responsible for such struggling circumstances of Art and Craft. First and prime most reason is underlying low government interest towards saving its rich heritage. Every country was to register their name in top position in the area technology, ease of business and high growth countries. Because of lower government interest, youth find more opportunities to grow in business sector in contrast of Art. Additionally, current generation is more inclined towards technology. Thirdly, education curriculum in school does not put much emphasis on art, wherein, in some schools, art and craft is only an optional subject, which also results in lower attentions to this area. Lastly, Art has achieved much recognition in higher educational institutions, which is also a significant reason for divergence of interest from this area.
Colossal efforts needs to be put in in order to revive the level of art and re-achieve the lost dignity of Arts. Primarily, international recognition is required by introducing the more award to appreciate major contributions in this field. It will not only encourage the adulthood to shift their focus towards it but also encourage government to understand its importance and initiate a spark within themselves to include their country on Tops contributors in this area. Further, dedicated museums and auctions centers need to be built to enable artists monetizing their hard-word to earn livelihood.
To conclude, we understand, although, art’s dignity is deprived due to other glamourous fields. Yet, it has not been buried under the grave completely. With little incentives and government focus, Art can regain its lost charm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, so, third, thirdly, as to, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41744548287 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94742247233 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613707165109 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1963257225 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.294117647 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212391608632 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626482012182 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362637246114 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129435090511 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368689512449 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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