Being a celebration such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits.
What are the problems and what are the possible solutions.
Popularity is a type of manifestation that comes with perquisites; though, being a famous athlete or actor can make one face some turmoils too. However, there are myriad of mayhemd,some windows for every adversity can be taken into account. It is beyond question that, humans with fame always bleak to the public because of no privacy as well as one can Tumble into plight that, one has to curb the prevail.
Firstly, one can not enjoy the pleasure of being alone due to the lack of privacy as one is always surrounded by other stuff. To cite an apt, an eminent singer named Lady Gaga incessantly complains about personal life because she is always slumped into the quicksand of media. Although, there is a remedy which can be taken into account in the form of distance that, a famous person who pines for personal life has to be acquitant in the matter of managing media and society. Undoubtebly, the proper gamble where such kind of situation arises would be to stay away from same.
Secondly, the fear of failure can blight the opportunity of every famous person and make one jittery. To state an apt, a famous athlete named Usain Bolt was afraid of in terms of sustaining success in his field. Though, if self-belief or self-esteem can be taken into notice, the doors can be opened for this adversity. Considering he pressure of holding success, one can make self-credence as a companion for one's journey.
In essence, privacy and pressure of clinging success are two pivotal challenges that one can confront in one's life. Albeit, choosing a proper salvation in the form of distance and self-conviction can make one exempted from same. From the foregoing thing, I can envisage that of these could happen, one can get immense pleasure to enjoy one's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, as to, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8125 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61280929659 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5897262837 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.079240885425 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034771833745 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323461715772 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0561272013861 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384779562393 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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