Being a celebrity – such as a famous film star or a sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or problems?
Despite being a famous person is a dream of many people, it has its disadvantages. Sport champions and movie stars have beneficial life style which helps them through many situations. Those merits and demerits of this way of life will be discussed in the following lines.
In my opinion, it is enjoyable to become a celebrity. This is for the fun of being loved by a lot of people who can share every moment in your life instead of being alone during any day of your life time. For Example, an article which was published in New Times in, 2015 shows that, 50% of American senior citizens are suffering from loneliness. Those people are envying celebrities for being surrounded by their fans. Accordingly, Celebrities life is an enjoyable one. They can get help any time they need to from many persons who like them.
In a second thought, other people are thinking that, a well-known person cannot have a private life. They do not dare to enjoy a dinner out with their families without being invaded by strangers which may lead to unhappiness. For Example, Survey published in The Art Magazine in , 2014 tells that, 90 % of famous actors and athletes are suffering from the lack of privacy outside of their home which interrupts their metal peace, Despite the fact of the joy it brings of being successful.
To conclude, I agree that it is beneficial to become a famous, successful person but it also has a price to be paid by some disadvantages which can be sorted out with some efforts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, may, second, so, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69847328244 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60089946563 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591603053435 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8608807821 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6923076923 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209502623393 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738124549704 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456721561345 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127206901904 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137970793282 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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