Being a celebrity – such as a famous film star or a sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or problems?
A celebrity status comes with a lot of privileges and responsibilities. To begin, a public personality is somebody who has reached a certain level of eminence in their respective fields. Usually, popular people hail from modelling, sports, entertainment, politics, research related domains. Hence, public interest becomes inevitable.
Firstly, the main advantage when there are loyal followers such a person can use this to social benefits.Eg: a beauty pageant winner propagating world peace, an economist like Amartya Sen writing about poverty etc.,Furthermore, any matter endorsed by such figures will garner media attention.
Secondly, this increases the goodwill of such person. it throws a positive light on that personality besides being a productive cause.Most commonly celebrities rely on these methods to further their career or explore new areas.
Thirdly, if the planet pays attention to any person closely, he or she will feature in commercial advertisements. Surely, this is going to increase their earnings and is certainly not hurting their wallet.A good example in the Indian context is with Hrithik Roshan or Deepika Padukone who are style icons in e-commerce websites. A fashion line associated with them is not overlooked by shopaholic souls.Obviously, their names itself serves as a brand for many products and hence is a friendly deal to their pockets
Lastly, like two sides of a coin, all these ups have their own set of issues. One most personalities do not have longevity in their careers, the others who survive maybe addicted to vices or involved in embarrassing controversies. They don't even get basic privacy. Also, with the increased use of social media the trolls, memes are certainly on the rise.Most end up with depression or suicidal instincts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, look, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47122302158 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08151634329 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708633093525 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.2339805174 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0953128859635 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342814624199 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388741062959 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.058460503135 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047235175005 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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