Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
People after becoming popular faces hurdles and enjoys benefits as well such as sports or film star. Although both aspects are interlinked in the society. I believe, the person who chooses this lavish life has more opportunity to enjoy his life but with some obstacles.
The biggest drawback is no personal life for those who decide to have a famous lifestyle. The people who live these lifestyle allows media to intervene in their personal activities to highlight them in every step. which in return media captures their positive as well as negative attitude, thus people face challenges when their negative behaviours are exposed to the public. Moreover, news channels take advantages of this attention and keep them in bulletins. Though, some famous individuals enjoy those moments as well by keeping their temper in control limits and show maturity level.
On the contrary, news channels and social platforms are also the sources of making them popular by keeping in news all the time. Hence, that popularity makes their life essay to become rich, live lavish lifestyle and many more goals can be obtained easily. For examples, famous film stars can easily grab the opportunity to work in the film industry irrespective of their talent and skills. In addition to that, becoming rich is not a hurdle anymore to them and many more problems of the daily life of a common man. Furthermore, wherever they travel, they can easily attain public attention and work around the world.
In conclusion, to be a celebrity invites problems as well as profits. To a large extent, the benefits outweigh the drawbacks of being a famous individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ts as well such as sports or film star. Although both aspects are interlinked in the soc...
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Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this lifestyle' or 'these lifestyles'?
Suggestion: this lifestyle; these lifestyles
...a famous lifestyle. The people who live these lifestyle allows media to intervene in their pers...
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Line 4, column 215, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...vities to highlight them in every step. which in return media captures their positive...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07380073801 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54687940065 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2768522133 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225238311104 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763412453604 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830085466214 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161706373152 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096315287121 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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