Being a celebrity - such as famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think hat being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
The individuals, who outperform in their respective fields such as, performing arts and sporting arena become a stardom. However, this status could be either beneficial or disruption to their life journey. In my view, being in a fame is more disadvantage than the other, since it affects their both own and family life.
Firstly, the celebrities have to forgo their privacy. They will always be in a center stage, where ever they go and what ever they do, as the general public, especially their followers, and the media will interrupt their privacy. More importantly, the media reports all their private life such as, their behaviors, places they visit and family gathering. Therefore, the famous individuals will have to scarify their private life.
Secondly, the family life of the personalities will also not be a journey in a smooth path. They rarely spend their valuable time with their wives and children, as the schedule for the day will be blocked with series of activities. This is the main reason for increase number of divorces and misbehavior of the adult children in the public locations. These impact the family bond and separation of family members.
On the other hand, super star status provides some positives things as well. They receive recognition in the society, which will last in their lifetime, even after they retire from their respective fields. For example, the cricketing star Sachin Tendulkar generates more wealth in performing commercial advertisement, even after he ceases from cricket two years back. As a result, the star do not have end to their earnings.
When all the above are taken into consideration, leading lights will have to face more negative events than positives in their living. Even though, they live a luxurious life, the quality of life will be affected. Hence, they have to loose their privacy to the general public and print media and a poor family bond.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Message: Use past participle here: 'ended'.
Suggestion: ended
...back. As a result, the star do not have end to their earnings. When all the abov...
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...e will be affected. Hence, they have to loose their privacy to the general public and...
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...they have to loose their privacy to the general public and print media and a poor family bond....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, as a result, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07911392405 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60400353332 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566455696203 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.384769539078 780% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5756015453 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123046851542 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467259703769 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301391839566 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768357850673 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212848734571 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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