the best way to reduce crime among people is to teach parents a good parenting skills.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?give your own opinion and examples.
It is irrefutable nowadays, crimes are increasing a lot in order to reduce it parent should get parenting skills thats highly important.however, some of them believe not only parents should teach their children but school teachers highly responsible because most of the time spend time in school. I will discuss this matter before any conclusion can be drawn.
On the other hand, juvenile delinquency crimes are happening extreme level due to parents are not supporting their children and they are not taking responsibilities to take care of children. Pupil "why involve in to crime?" because parents doing always fighting in front of them. Due to this reasons behind they are not getting love form their parents and they start to hate this society as a result,they start to do some criminal activities and finally, they will become dangerous criminals against the society. For example, one of the media who has taken a survey about why people are doing crimes and finally given a survey is saying 64%criminals matter from their parents.
On the one hand, education is matter to judge the people and one of the survey is saying our education only will decide us about our future. Some of them believe if students go to school then they will to do any criminal activities because teacher make them life better and student will listen what is correct and what is wrong from the teacher only not from the parents. For example, In Kerala crime rate has decreased for the past 10 years and reason is 97% people got educated.
To conclude this, government has to take responsibilities to teach parents skills to their parents to reduce the crime rate and parents should know their responsibilities how to make their children as a good manner and involve in social activities rather than teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, so, then, as to, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97359735974 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71815790612 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511551155116 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.747949124 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.7 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19500212768 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785984875426 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499702040111 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132059810257 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445560564988 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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