The best way to tackle the problem of obesity is to educate people about healthy eating.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the problem of obesity is rapidly increasing at an alarming rate in many countries. there are many ways to resolve this issue. however, I would agree that the best way to resolve this issue is to aware people about healthy diet for two reasons.
Firstly, educating individuals about lowering their calories intake in food could be one of the best remedies for obesity. this is because it is convenient to let individuals know that how much calories they consume in a food they eat. Although, I concede that people may combat with the obesity by doing different kinds of exercises, lower calorie diet intake might help them to lose their weight more rapidly. Moreover, if provided, calorie charts help people to count their calories intake and to deal with obesity problem effectively. For example, Famous Pakistan Singer Adnan Sami lost 40 kgs and overcame his problem of obesity by following a calorie chart provided by his dietician.
Secondly, educating people about the healthy diet is the best way because of its no extra cost. Undoubtedly, there are no free lunches in this world, but for a sake of living, food needs to be consumed anyhow. this is because changing diet habits will not cost extra if a person has shifted to a healthy diet. however, I acknowledge that by doing a physical activity such as brisk walk in a free entry park would not cost a single penny, but going to the park sometimes may involve an additional cost of car fuel or public transport charges for reaching there, whereas the cost associated with the food purchase remains the same.
In conclusion, to deal with obesity problem, there could be many ways to solve this problem. however, I believe that it could be easy to tackle this problem by educating people about low calorie diets and this will also not cost extra to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8253968254 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43974811697 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530158730159 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.023958159 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.571428571 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232831509927 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938271747091 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075710558856 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158769146269 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468999233269 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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