Billions of dollars are spent every year on space research. This is a waste of money, this money should instead be spent to solve the problems of people on Earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are different opinions in regard to the question of whether people should still provide space explorations. Some people believe that the great amount of money that is spent on space research should be used on current purposes. In contrast, this essay will put forward the notion that universe learning is important sphere of science and should be payed accordingly. First the necessity of this sphere of studying will be proven by the analysis of new opportunities that space science opens to us. A discussion of inventions that are made during these explorations will also support the view stated above.
The main reason why we need to spend money on space researches is that people has faced the problem of lack of fossil fuels and planets within Solar system as well as beyond it has potentially large amount of new elements that can replace the traditional Earth sources. Not only would this help to reduce carbon dioxide emission, but it also would help to protect environment of our planet. For instance, many origins of helium have been found on Moon during resent researches.
Another reason why the space exploration is mandatory to be well payed is that while such researches are hold many new founds are occurred and current technologies are developed. An illustrative example of this is that is “the Moon race” between the Soviet Union and the United States. During this challenge transistors were invented and as well as they were successfully applied a few years later.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that people should spend as much money as they could on space exploration since there are strong grounds for subscribing to this view. This is due to the fact that this kind of research helps mankind to find new fossil fuels. Also, the exploration leads the technical improvement by itself. After analyzing the subject it has become quite evident that society should support this activity in financial way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...ere are different opinions in regard to the question of whether people should still provide space explo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...successfully applied a few years later. In conclusion, I firmly believe that peo...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ds the technical improvement by itself. After analyzing the subject it has become qui...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, so, still, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, as well as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05900621118 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61441439131 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568322981366 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6417076112 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.6 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284944263397 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871755753813 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705106953424 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163764924057 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539859252702 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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