Internet has become panacea for all sorts of problems. Due to the thrived development in technology, use of internet has been manifold upsurge and thus, without internet, life would become unpredictable or erratic. One of the important and predominant usage of internet is online shopping such as buying books, air tickets, groceries, mobile phones, gadgets and equipments. But everything came out with some pros and cons but according to my notion, it has advantages on a massive scale.
Online shopping has become world wide in demand, and specially admired by youth and educated people. Firstly, buying things on internet saves our precious and valuable time, secondly we could get tremendous offers, discounts and gifts on such items. Apart from it, we could have influx products with availability of many options in online shopping and can easily exchange or return any product any time, which also saves money.
In present time, due to the technological advancement, as we can buy everything without going outside, it makes us inactive, tedious, and uninteresting, which might be upsurge the chances of being feeble. Sometimes, many products also came out with fabricated or refute items, with local brands and though we had to face size related problems. Still, advantages of online shopping somehow outweigh the disadvantages of online shopping due to its exchange and return policies.
Online shopping also gives us many options like comparing features, prices, along with reviews. Recently, i had to buy a jacket of Wildcraft brand and i had already visited plethora showrooms and shopping malls but i was not able to get that particular design and even on online shopping i got it with a huge discount. Along with it as i had to go for an office related meeting to Australia, i got a voucher of rs.1500 on Air ticket.
According to my opine, Online (Internet) shopping is sweeping with pinnacled development. As we can also order foreign products online, it will enhances the trade and relation of our country with other countries but on the same hand, use of foreign products could also minimize the value of our Indian products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
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Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...an office related meeting to Australia, i got a voucher of rs.1500 on Air ticket....
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'enhance'
Suggestion: enhance
... order foreign products online, it will enhances the trade and relation of our country w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73049052597 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553977272727 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1591805024 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.266666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4666666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183107698222 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697580133338 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591948307015 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104176539581 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618289109974 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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