There has been a recent trend where-in everyone is using internet to fulfil their needs by shopping online. Starting from groceries and even buying an airline ticket, shopping has become easy with the help of technology. However, purchasing through online portals has it's own pros and cons.
First advantage that people get from portals is variety. That is, different portals serve as one roof for stacking and showcasing goods from different brands. People can search for their preferred brand and depending on their likelihood can buy things accordingly.
Second advantage that one get's from online shopping is price. Due to increase in shopping portals from every type of industry, people can get huge discounts due to the competitive pricing of a product.
Thirdly, in a country like India where traffic jams are very common, shopping online is a blessing in disguise. People want to avoid the long traffic snarls and choose to buy things online. This also saves a country's precious resource, gasoline. Moreover, less traffic on roads means less pollution.
Adverse effect of shopping online is that one can be fooled to buy duplicate products since you cannot feel the item of your interest. One should always use renowned and professional shopping portals for buying things.
Another disadvantage that comes out of this ease of shopping online is it has become a private affair. For example, families no longer go out and shop together for their groceries or even when it comes to buying apparels.
In the end, as someone has said excess of everything is bad. So one should wisely use the technology enabled shopping portals. People should invest some time in going out together with their family for shopping.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, third, thirdly, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1524822695 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48949556125 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59219858156 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.706779618 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.4736842105 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8421052632 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151838282024 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492454610862 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425108074066 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754713731131 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350912364432 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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