car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now "One big traffic jam" how true do you think this statement is?
what measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars
In this scientific era, with the rapid increase in cars and other vehicles on roads there has been huge jam on highways which results into wastage of time and pollution. In this essay,I will discuss some of the drawbacks of holding private conveyance and suggest viable solutions for the same.
On the one hand, it is undoubtedly true fact that many family members are these days have their own vehicle and therefore commute alone either to offices or for any personal work. In addition to this, it would result into heavy traffic jam on the roads which is indirectly proportional to the huge jump in air quality index due to pollution. Futhermore, it has been seen that the issues related to respiratory organs such as asthma ,blood pressure is nowadays are touching the sky and more and more individuals are affected by them. Not only this, parking spaces are decreasing and as a consequence, poor relationship is developing among nations.
On the other hand, every lock has a key similarly every problem has a remedy behind it. First solution that can be used to get rid of this is the low prices of tickets for public transport. In short, more people should be encouraged by the government by imposing flat fares to offices. Secondly, however, smart phone industry is bringing revolution in the world of mobile applications by developing car pooling websites , this can be motivated by placing free screens near by public places , offices and malls.
In conclusion, it is the right of every citizen of this society to prevent the environment by the adverse affects of global warming and should come forward by using different methods such as limited use of vehicles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in short, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90845070423 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62581592777 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.9624432327 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.727272727 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6363636364 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147047097972 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478865963079 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337779577949 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805361407032 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215081216446 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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