Central and local governments make a frantic attempt to promote festivals to create a lot of revenue. Some people think this money should be invested in social programmes for the poor. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Many people think that government and individuals are spending too much money on national celebrations. Because it brings many benefit for society and national economics.
Spending money on national celebrations affects positively to society. Firstly people have the time and the place to rest or to play. They have many opportunities relaxing after their busy days at works. If holidays are not organized, people will not time to rest and time for family. Secondly, spending money to organized celebrations help people maintain the national traditions. Nowadays more foreign festivals are imported. The young people attracted by them and forget the traditional festivals.
On the other hand, spend money on national celebrations is a beneficial investment. The festivals will attract many tourists and local residents will receive more revenue from buying souvenirs. Also, this helps restaurantsrestaurants and hotels to earn much money. Moreover, celebrations promote promote economic development. In days of celebrationscelebrations, consumption increases dramatically.
To conclude, I believe the actions of investing on national festivals is a wise response of government to people’s expectation.
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Suggestion: many benefits
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: promote
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 174.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98850574713 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.61102523349 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626436781609 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.5152658981 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.4666666667 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6 20.7667163134 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155706674924 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515529830681 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351011086083 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101747033 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122864166934 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.93 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.28 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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