Lack of respect from the younger generation towards their parents has depreciated over the years, this character has led to a negative impact in the society. The positive growth of nations depends on its younger generation and they have to trained and guided properly.
Firstly, growing up in a home with parents that are rarely around has led to breeding a generation with no manners. For example,growing up as a child my parents were always around to groom and train me to be a better person.
Secondly, parents leave their duty for society to do. The first duty one has as a parent is to the child and nothing else because when you leave your job for society to do it breeds the opposite of the expected. For example, a parent is exposing his/her child to view what he/ she as an adult should view. This will lead to complete disrespect from the child to the parent and not just that he/she will go out and be a negative influence rather than a positive one in the society.
Finally, parents do need to take out their time to understand their children. A lot of times guardians just expect teenagers to know certain things because they were not taught these things in their days. Well times change and so do generations, so therefore assuming that a child should know how to show respect is very wrong.
In conclusion, parents should take out time to train their children and also remember that these children make up the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6484375 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47496004939 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1871795862 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274346885513 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10463589731 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739873846227 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150629269848 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646835956133 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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