Those who grow up with lack of financial ability tend to value their limited resources. These children are better equipped to face adult problems than those who have everything at their disposal. In my opinion, I completely agree that growing up under difficult situations makes you well prepared for the future and this essay shall discuss the same.
To begin with, wealthy children are not exposed to the hardships of life. They are ignorant to the difficulties faced by the people in the outside world. In addition, they are under the impression that - "money can buy happiness" and just by display of wealth all problems can be solved. However, if they lack proper planning, situations can go downhill. For example, many rich billionaires resort to committing suicide on becoming bankrupt. Since, they are used to having a lot of wealth, they are incapable of handling any financial crisis.
On the other hand, growing up in a family which was short of money makes children not take wealth for granted. They make optimum use of time and work extremely hard to earn and save more. Moreover, when they are adults, they turn out to be well groomed to face any challenges. For instance, 21% of the actors in Hollywood grew up in poverty and on becoming rich ensured that the downtrodden were not forgotten and donated most of their earnings to charity. Therefore, these children minimize unnecessary spending's and prefer to lead a sustainable life.
In conclusion, I absolutely agree that children who come from financially low families and better to suited to face the unforeseeable future. On the contrary, will the privileged find it difficult? Not necessarily. Although, I believe being bought up by wealthy parents makes them more dependent and less prepared for adulthood!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...ces. These children are better equipped to to face adult problems than those who have...
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Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...hey turn out to be well groomed to face an challenges. For instance, 21% of the ac...
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Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an challenge' or simply 'challenges'?
Suggestion: an challenge; challenges
...hey turn out to be well groomed to face an challenges. For instance, 21% of the actors in Hol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10437710438 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83040910665 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609427609428 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6779996163 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1764705882 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58823529412 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299732319819 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809044718854 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902799280234 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182897497812 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855701509257 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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