Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people's lives: automobiles, bicycle, and airplanes. Use specific reasons and example to support your answer.
The era of transportation has changes impressively. From ancient times the necessity of travel gave an idea of vehicle invention. Among the best inventions like railway, bicycle, the car, ships, submarines, and airplanes, the airplanes are the most amazing invention of recent times. Below are some of the reasons why the airplane has changed the lives of people's.
One of the best reason, that airplane is best invention is because it has connected all the countries of the world very easily. One can travel from India to Canada as well as to New Zealand in a few hours. Where if they travel through sea transport it may take many days or month to reach to the destination.
The second reason is that through the airplane, all the isolated places are connected. Because of this invention, people who live in remote places can easily travel wherever they need to. For the elderly, the airplane is a safe mode of transportation as they take less time and give comfortable transportation. Commuting becomes convenient for them.
Finally, due to the best benefits in this travel mode, local businessmen got an opportunity for expansion in their dealers. They can work overseas and transport goods through this medium. Also, one can import things for their business as well as for personal usage.
To conclude this essay, the airplane is one the greatest invention in this time. People's lives became easier to travel faster and safer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: give
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, may, second, so, well, as for, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97916666667 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70207931765 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1500803274 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6875 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118873668898 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436103383359 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344183258971 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695114207249 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403667243167 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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