Over the last ten years, students pursuing further studies at universities has become increasingly popular. While some believe that this trend helps in building an educated community, some think that the growing demand might deteriorate the quality of education provided at the universities. This essay with discuss the benefits of an increase in educated population and the short comings to cater to a large number of students.
Undoubtedly, and educated community is beneficial for the economy of a country. For example, in a country like India, the relative contribution to the growth of the economy is more by software professionals. In addition, an opportunity to work as a white collared professional, increases the income of a family and hence the standard of living as well. Families with relatively more and stable income are more likely to invest in good housing projects there by contributing to the infrastructure of a city.
However, there are some draw backs to having a largely graduate student community. For example, it becomes increasing difficult to build new universities to meet the needs of the students. To build universities a country needs quite a large number of blue collared workers such as masons, carpenters, plumbers, electricians and others. The lack of skilled manual laborers could lead to an increased cost to build universities and the universities may have to accommodate more students in the existing campus. This might impact the quality of education provided.
In conclusion, a largely educated community builds a progressive and a developed nation. However, skilled manual laborers are also important to build a great infrastructure for the nation. Governments, should take measures to ensure that the quality of the education is not compromised to meet the growing demand by ensuring that the students gain additional vocational skills in addition to their degrees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 402, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ation and the short comings to cater to a large number of students. Undoubtedly, and educated ...
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Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'draws'?
Suggestion: draws
...e of a city. However, there are some draw backs to having a largely graduate stud...
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...uild universities a country needs quite a large number of blue collared workers such as masons, c...
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Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ressive and a developed nation. However, skilled manual laborers are also importa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10496913565 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0061494311 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0360195972459 0.244688304435 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0128941328106 0.084324248473 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0173117427897 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0225242813535 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178112097255 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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