Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse.
What is your opinion?
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Recently the most important trouble in the world and the nature is climate transforming. Some people believe that, stop using fossil fuel, would help to reduce climate changes. I totally agree about using natural energy instead of gas or coal. I admit this view because of three main reasons such as, the importance of environment, the irreparable effect of harmful fuels and the running out feature of gas and coal.
Firstly, environment is one of the important issues in our lives in comparison with the industry. If the climate changes, it could be harmful for plants and animals or even human beings who lives on the earth. For example, industrial fuel caused contamination of the air; as a result, we would face the problems of global warming. Actually, environment which is one of the most significant debating issues these days is much more important than economic problems of the industries.
Secondly, some harmful effect of the industrial fuel might never become recompense. In fact, changing the climate might lead the environment to happen bunch of difficulties which are impossible to resolve, as a matter of fact changing the climate might extinct some species which can live only in a particular climate or have special habitat. That happens because of the ecosystem change. So the extinction of animals is one of the unpleasant results of changing the climate and it is impossible to have that kind of species again.
Thirdly, in my point of view there is a plenty of natural resource. That means we would lose fuel such as gas, coal….Then human have to look for other replacement for their future, so it is better to pay attention to the environment and change their fuel for industrial use instantly. For example some powerful governments like Americans try to find some other way to replace with common industrial fuel because of the lack of their access to them. Then it is possible to use the natural kind of energies in order to have a replacement plan for finishing the industrial fuel.
To sum up, Climate changing would be one of the considerably important subjects to discuss and there are some reasons for that such as, fossil fuel. Although some people agree to use other energy resources such as wind, there is finding economic problem for industry. I agree with changing the resources into natural resource.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Then
...s we would lose fuel such as gas, coal….Then human have to look for other replacemen...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'for example', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243055555556 0.247107183377 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.134259259259 0.155533422707 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0949074074074 0.0946595960268 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0439814814815 0.0501214627716 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0347222222222 0.0437548338989 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.143518518519 0.122226691241 117% => OK
Participles: 0.025462962963 0.0403226058552 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68574454049 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0347222222222 0.0326793684256 106% => OK
Particles: 0.00462962962963 0.00163938923432 282% => OK
Determiners: 0.106481481481 0.0861772015684 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0208333333333 0.021408717616 97% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00925925925926 0.011925033212 78% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2349.0 1933.35771543 121% => OK
No of words: 394.0 316.048096192 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96192893401 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20517956788 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350253807107 0.374742101984 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.284263959391 0.28420135186 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177664974619 0.203846283523 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116751269036 0.137316102897 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68574454049 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479695431472 0.56093040696 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.5508989809 60.7387585426 85% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.7368421053 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4941941603 49.517814964 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.631578947 127.492653851 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7368421053 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.947368421053 0.814263465372 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 49.1632380443 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.9347826087 1.69124875643 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216327190211 0.332605444948 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.132690312047 0.102741220458 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0666094245485 0.0668466124924 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.566058202941 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158189501333 0.148594505496 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997005733043 0.134430193775 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541057104183 0.0742795772207 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.432155563955 0.324371583561 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0394769143284 0.0638462369009 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163917823102 0.228012699653 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552256527806 0.058150111329 95% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 5.90881763527 220% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 10.4468937876 172% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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