It is true that deteriorating environmental conditions have raised a concern among people. Strata of folks believe that reduction in usage of fossil fuels and utilizing the renewable power resources can help to tackle the problem. I agree with the given statement as such a trend can help to minimize the difficulties associated with weather.
Firstly, usage of other energy resources can help to prevent the extinction of non-renewable resources of energy. In addition to it, they are cheap and easily accessible as they are derived mainly from the natural resources which are present in abundance such as wind and sun. They do not need mining or other laborious tasks for their extraction. Moreover, they have made the life of common man easy, for instance, production of electricity with the help of sun light has proved to be more cost effective and it does not cast a negative impact on the environment. Thus, renewable resources are the best alternatives to the non-renewable sources of energy.
On the other hand, coal and oil when used extensively by the companies leads to pollution, especially, air pollution that is not good for the health of human beings. It makes people more prone to diseases such as asthma and skin allergies.Along with it, as they are removed from the ground, so they have contaminated the soil which has caused the land to become infertile. Furthermore, because of the limited availability, their usage is restricted which cannot meet the energy demands of the current world.
To conclude, according to me alternate energy resources possess greater advantages over the use of fossil fuels for the factories. Promoting the use of non renewable resources of energy is not a solution to control the environmental problems.
- The ownership of cars should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- The governement should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country’s development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- The ownership of cars should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- The ownership of cars should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Now a days food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience. 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12847222222 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94578512127 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565972222222 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1287123274 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.615384615 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156508810094 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561773583417 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362798028021 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102102030849 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325569942681 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.