Some people think that the amount of voilence that is shown in movies is a disturbing situation. However there are some who believe it is appropriate to show the present amount of voilence in movies. Describe your opinion.
It is true that, there is a vast variety of genre available in films. Strata of folks believe that movie producers should refrain from showing violent scenes on screen. However, I donot agree with the given idea as people learn various things from these movies.
First of all, individuals learn to handle difficult situations in their life. They gain knowledge from them as movies show the appropriate reaction of a victim to a particular condition. Although, it may give the viewers an idea about how the culprit plots a crime, but responses of the prey to the ill deeds is the major limelight of the video, and the sufferer who defeats the criminal is often portrayed as hero. For instance, a survey conducted by Livenews revealed that many people managed to escape from the trouble because of the violent movies. They used the same tactics which were displayed on the screen to ward off the offenders. Thus, entertainment industry acts a tutor which teaches people various survival skills.
Moreover, watching such content also make people emotionally strong. They donot panic on seeing bloodshed, rather they act wisely in emergency situations to save lives. Furthermore, this mental stability also aids them to help people affected by disasters as they play active roles in giving firstaid to the ones in need. As an example, research done at Harvard university reported that children who watch violent pictures are less prone to depression. Along with it, they are better survivors in the adversities of life as compared to those who donot watch such movies. Therefore, it is a proven fact that these films help to built one's mental strength.
To conclude, such movies should be promoted on a large scale. They help a person to grow as a successfull individual who can easily handle the tough situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98679867987 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57409663541 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630363036304 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0021736596 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8823529412 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103350824269 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314805749611 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028474859263 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641374999768 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019110329973 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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