Climate change is the biggest threat to life on our planet
How accurate is this statement?
Are there any other big threats to mankind?
It is argued that due to the environmental changes, living beings on earth planet are in great danger. This essay will argue that this statement is completely true because global warming is increasing at a staggering rate. However, due to the overpopulation lives of human beings are in jeopardy.
Greenhouse gases in the atmosphere such as carbon dioxide and methane, which are mainly emitted from automobiles and industries form a blanket over the earth’ atmosphere and entrap the warmth of the sun. It gives rise to the phenomenon of global warming due to which glaciers melt, and rise in sea levels causes flooding in coastal areas resulting in mass devastation of livestock, forests, and human beings. For example, Environmental protecting agency in Pakistan stated that with the recent trends in global warming, over the hundred years the temperature of the atmosphere will rise to 22 degrees Celsius and it a massive threat to the earth and life on the earth planet.
On the other hand, the population of earth is massively increasing and about to exceed the carrying capacity of the world. In other words, the rise in the number of people has endangered the biodiversity on earth because the planet is running out of resources due to their overconsumption. Excessive population results in the consumption of agricultural land for the building of houses, consuming food and water at large. For example, The Department of Earth Sciences in the United Kingdom reveals that by 2080, If crucial measures were not been taken to control population, then the earth would be deprived of the natural resources like food, water, and agricultural land. So, overpopulation is the second biggest threat to life on earth.
To conclude, undeniably, the atmospheric changes are a serious threat to living things; however, the increase in the number of people more than the capacity of the earth has also endangered life on the earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, then, for example, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12302839117 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87874205307 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529968454259 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5619319379 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.333333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11211876833 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494167239381 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681460527029 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748904420752 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290480451599 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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