A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your locality.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community.
Do you support or oppose the factory establishment?
Explain your position.
With the increase in population of the country innumerable factories and industries are constructed in various areas not only to increase the demand of the people but also to provide employment opportunities, whereas it also affects the environment of the country. In my opinion I do believe having a factory near my locality will offer many benefits to our society.
The opening of more and more factories affects the environment of my locality as for construction a large piece of land will be cleared cutting trees, thus not only affecting the environment but will also hamper the natural beauty of the society. Moreover, the industry will throw their residue and harmful waste on roads, causing release of harmful gases such as carbon monoxide, and nitrogen oxide in air. This will lead to people suffer from many health issues such as cardiovascular problems, asthma, and tuberculosis. To elucidate, according tor the recent study more that 5- percent of the environment pollution is caused by factories and industries.
However, with the opening of the factory near the locality will unlock numerous employment opportunities for people. Thus, people will not only have to travel far of distance for their work but will also able to earn a handsome salary and will be able to purchase the basic necessities and will live a comfortable life. Additionally, it will lead to the overall development of our society as the price of land buildings will increase and our society will be considered as posh are with people have an excellent lifestyle.
To conclude, I vehemently agree advantages of opening a factory in our locality outweighs the disadvantages. It will help in enhancement of our locality and will help in providing employment opportunities to people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...salary and will be able to purchase the basic necessities and will live a comfortable life. Addit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, as for, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15972222222 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98025103291 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503472222222 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.834397686 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.090909091 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0733443947131 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393188075894 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338276628665 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.054750535268 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184882570468 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.