Competitiveness among high school students should be
encouraged. Do you agree or disagree?
The gradual merging of cultures and economies the world over has led to an
increasingly competitive international job market. Recognition of the role
competitiveness plays in success has permeated most facets of society, and this
includes the institutions that prepare students for adulthood. It is agreed that
competitiveness among high school students should be encouraged. The merits of
this position will be shown by looking at how a competitive spirit can help train
young people to both spot opportunity and cooperate with others.
Firstly, grooming students to be competitive at a young age can help prepare them to
seize opportunities down the road. For example, in many countries, high school is
followed by a period of intense competition, as students vie for scholarships,
internships and career options. Students who are not naturally competitive or willing
to improve their skills in relation to others will not achieve the same results as those
that approach chance more aggressively. Thus, it is important to encourage
competition among students at an early age to provide them with a strong start in
life.
Furthermore, competition in team settings breeds cooperation, a trait that often acts
as a precursor to success in life. For instance, to overcome an opponent, the
members of a high school basketball team must work together to maximize their
collective strengths. This acts as an example of how competition in a group setting
can teach a young person the importance of teamwork, a valuable skill these young
people will need in their future careers. Thus, it is clear that benefits do derive from
the encouragement of competition in high school.
As the above shows, competitiveness is beneficial to teenagers because it prepares
them to grab educational and professional opportunities and as well instills an
understanding of the importance of cooperation. Thus, it can be concluded that there
are clear and healthful advantages to encouraging competition among high school students
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47949526814 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24459259482 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545741324921 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6158643854 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.071428571 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305836486789 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129183240825 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135700216774 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891558122028 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11185534751 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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