Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is thought by some that university graduation is the key to get a better job. Whereas, others believe that soft skills and learning some practical skills are more vital to achieving a good job. In my opinion, both the factors are important to qualify in the job process although it depends on the job role as well, which will be discussed in the following paragraphs
University education is pivotal for the higher academic jobs like scientist, teacher and doctors, without degree course student cannot apply to these professional jobs. Moreover, these criteria are set to eliminate the candidate who is unable to handle such posts. For illustration, the duties of the doctor cannot be learnt in a short term training course, the person must study hard for a long duration to take part in the practical work. Hence, after various examinations in the course work candidate is allowed to examine the patients.
On the other hand, business and industrial jobs required soft skills and experienced players. Which can directly take part in the work without wasting much time for the organization and work-related training. In other words, these trained employee save a lot of money from a company which was supposed to be used in the training and therefore, organizations prefer to employee these skilful candidates.
In conclusion, education plays a vital role in human development whether a person needs to apply for the job in industry or academia. Furthermore, higher university education is required to apply for better academic jobs whereas soft skill training will be enough for the application of good industrial work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13533834586 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79598170757 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56015037594 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.6498602883 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.181818182 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250981819818 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102540539951 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946889418438 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161381431423 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11531325516 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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