The job market is becoming increasingly competitive day by day. Nowadays, to land on a good job, it is necessary to have both a solid educational background and adequate on-the-job experience. Moreover, the soft skills, such as communication and time management, are playing a crucial role in determining the employers' favorite candidate. While deciding on the key criteria for employability, arguments can be made for both the need and education and the development of experience and soft-skill. However, personally, I believe that a candidate who is seasoned and has more soft skills is more likely to be selected for a competitive job than those who only have a university degree.
Supporters of the idea of educational background securing desirable employment primarily focus on two factors. Firstly, highly ranked universities have a formidable alumni base. As an evidence, of 167 fortune-500 companies in a database compiled by Nielsen, a highly reputed market researching firm, about 71% have CEOs from IV League colleges. Moreover, the researches conducted in top-ranked universities frequently relate to the job nature of the industries. In that case, companies directly recruit the researchers so that they can rip the benefit of their research. For example, finance graduates who develop financial models for their university projects usually get absorbed by investment banking firms. As a result, some people are more inclined to the idea that the university degree is the key component while pursuing a good employment opportunity.
On the other hand, others, including myself, believe that both experience and soft skills are more crucial for achieving superior employment. Adequate experience regarding the task at hand is required to be able to make informed decisions. For example, an experienced weatherman will be more likely to successfully predict the weather than a novice one. Moreover, having soft skills in his or her arsenal, an employee will have a better probability to be not only adaptive to new changes but also more efficient regarding productivity. To illustrate, a great portion of an executive's job requires communicating with internal and external clients, which requires soft skills such as communication and public speaking.
Moreover, people who are now leading the top organizations, as discussed previously, had to become good communicators and gain experience before they could attain their current status. Therefore, gathering a certain amount of seasoning and developing soft skills are two key components in securing employability.
To conclude, although university education plays a certain role in securing a good job, experience and soft skills are more critical. The essay argued the effects of a university degree, experience, and soft skills on employability and concluded that the latter two are more important to gain a reputed role in and organization, supporting my personal opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 344, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...role in and organization, supporting my personal opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2499.0 1615.20841683 155% => OK
No of words: 452.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52876106195 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19671432829 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544247787611 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 810.0 506.74238477 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3989421684 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5238095238 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2380952381 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304293498268 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850909261526 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618441335047 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165203443328 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422946512362 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 78.4519038076 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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