Computes are helpful to younger generation. Computes contribute more in current society.
Do you agree or not?
Computes are special machines, which makes humans sophisticated job into easy one. Computers servers as backbone of current generation. Life without computers is very tedious for current generation.
I personally feel that computed enhances knowledge level of students. It makes human jobs easier, hence people prefer to innovate using computers. Recent research done by machine, proved that the Artificial Intelligence were able to find 12 causes of cancer, where the human research department found only 10. Computed has self-thinking ability and satisfy most of the needs of humans, therefore I feel youth are being benefited by upskilling themselves using machines. Computed mark their presence in most of the areas such as medicine, manufacturing and education. They ease the job of humans by programming ability. Robotics field is anticipated to grow in larger demand during next 5 years, hence students tend to show more interest in doing computer based graduation. Private sector universities modify their course content to bridge the gap of current education system,
On the other hand, computers causes lot of health issues. Prolonged exposure of machines will cause damage eyes. Computers makes human jobs easy, hence the normal thinking ability of adults seems to be reduced. Usage of computers is grown significant. Therefore, the manual scope will get reduced in future. Human manual jobs will be at risk in future.
To conclude, Computers act as a good support to humans and people should not get more addicted with gadgets. Personal life should not compromised when technology is advanced. Youth generation should spend time equally with family and friends in order to lead a better life. Technology advancement should however not ruin daily life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dge the gap of current education system, On the other hand, computers causes lot ...
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Line 6, column 298, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...fore, the manual scope will get reduced in future. Human manual jobs will be at risk in f...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ture. Human manual jobs will be at risk in future. To conclude, Computers act as a go...
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'compromise'
Suggestion: compromise
... with gadgets. Personal life should not compromised when technology is advanced. Youth gene...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, i feel, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46181818182 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7277672279 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661818181818 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.588021632 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236489809953 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776653783713 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088706376792 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155204214057 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090966340828 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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