Many people believe that an effective public transport system is a key component of a modern city. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of public transport.
Transportation facilities is one of the key requirement in modern city. In order to commute to longer distance, people don't prefer to use their own vehicles. Having a good transport facility, will help most of the people to depend on it. Government would be receiving more revenue if more people depend on it. However, some people will prefer their own transport. Lets see the pros and cons of having public transport below:
The advantage of having a good transport facility is people would not have a problem of commuting to their desired destination. If the connectivity offered by the transport department is good then most of the people would use it. If people wish to travel at midnight then they will feel easy. Since the pollution level is increasing day by day it will be good to have public transport in modern city. If more people travel using public transport during peak office hours then the congestion in road will be reduced. Thus, having a good public transport will be an added advantage in the modern city.
The disadvantage of having public transport in modern city is quite minimal. For people who wish to enjoy their journey in the way they wish to do, will be a challenge. Some people who wish to adventure do not rely on public transport. Also, if people wish to carry their belongings with them for a short trip/ short travel then they have a challenge using public transport.
Having public transport will be more beneficial to people who effectively use it. However, if people who rely on their own transport will not have any impact in the increase in public transport.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...o have public transport in modern city. If more people travel using public transpo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80144404332 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58905933591 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.415162454874 0.561755894193 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.309168249 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2352941176 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94117647059 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367282525611 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166471492906 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967313554381 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269862444137 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022268356482 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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