Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?
The industrial and technological revolution in the last century has rocketed human civilization light years ahead. However, the after-effects of such progress have resulted in complicated obstacles such as environmental problems, over-population and literacy issues among many others. In this essay, I will forecast the struggles that India could face along with the possible solutions to tackle them.
India's population is growing at an exponential rate due to unawareness and low literacy rate. Additionally, India is unable to educate the growing number of people in its nation. Moreover, there is an inadequate number of educational institutes and the standard of education is sub-par compared to its international counterparts. Furthermore, the consistently degrading environmental factors are lowering the health standards of the nation. These problems exist at the moment and only seem to be getting worse as the years pass by.
Most of the problems plaguing India are inter-connected and must be fixed in a systematic format. However, measures can be taken by the government to rectify the problems immediately. Firstly, the government could set up more colleges and universities in rural India as an attempt to educate and fix over-crowding. Secondly, pollution of air, water and land could be reduced by subsidizing eco-friendly attempts by huge corporations and individuals. Lastly, awareness drives could be set up and promoted to understand the current state of population explosion and the repercussions it could have on the future generations.
In conclusion, attempts to avoid future problems should occur at both an individual and national level. Governments will require support and assistance from their citizens to be able to bring about and implement life-enhancing change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66420664207 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33400092261 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627306273063 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6715658313 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214272760831 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659583568446 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498011975215 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113208264763 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170282945566 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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