Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letterExplain the reasons for the noiseApologizeDescribe what action you will take

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Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter
Explain the reasons for the noise
Apologize
Describe what action you will take

Dear Mr.Stone,

I am writing this letter to apologize for the noise complaint you raised. I am sorry for the inconvenience caused to you and your family over the last few nights.

I started learning to play the drums recently. As you may already be aware, I work full-time and the only free time I am able to dedicate to my craft is during the evenings and weekends.

I sincerely apologize for the disturbance and inconvenience. I did not expect the sound of my instrument to be so loud. I completely understand your position and request you to accept my sincerest apologies.

I promise to refrain from practicing the drums at my home. I have rented a music studio nearby and will continue my sessions there. I understand that it was not a good idea to practice the drums in buildings of this kind.

I hope this situation has not affected our friendship. Once again, my heartfelt apologies for the inconvenience caused.

Yours sincerely,
Praneet K Nadar

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Stone
Dear Mr.Stone, I am writing this letter to apologi...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...our family over the last few nights. I started learning to play the drums rece...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e sound of my instrument to be so loud. I completely understand your position and...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ou to accept my sincerest apologies. I promise to refrain from practicing the ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n from practicing the drums at my home. I have rented a music studio nearby and w...
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Line 9, column 133, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...by and will continue my sessions there. I understand that it was not a good idea ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the drums in buildings of this kind. I hope this situation has not affected ou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83233532934 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91654266054 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640718562874 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.929353269 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.0769230769 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8461538462 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.538461538462 4.34317383033 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201610451883 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673697830846 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738437592241 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092732849261 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811757426362 0.0580467560999 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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