Countries globally are already facing extensive challenges related to the environment. Population growth and literacy will soon become added hurdles to the countries which are already expecting an environmental crisis. This essay will discuss the problems that Sri Lanka will face in the coming years and put forward several solutions to overcome them.
Sri Lanka is a small island but consists of a population that is equal to Australia, and Sri Lanka has fewer developed cities compared. Hence a high number of people occupying an area causing population saturation, leading to traffic congestion, pollution, and increased cost of living. It would take me roughly 40miniutes to commute to my workplace, which is 7km away. Moreover, rent prices increase by 10 percent annually, and it is impossible to afford to buy a house. This trend will hinder plans for economic growth and development.
However, I do not believe education is a challenge for my country, as it provides free education. Sri Lanka's literacy rate is estimated to be above 90 percent in 2019. Given that the government will continue to support free education and scholarships in the future, the threat may not be significant.
Proactively planning how to handle challenges in the future while addressing the current concerns which may lead to it is essential to overcome trails related to population and education. Sri Lanka should invest in building new cities and improving the transportation infrastructure, Which should encourage new businesses to emerge in these new cities. As a result, the population will be spread-out the country leading to less traffic congestion and pollution.
In conclusion, years and years of development and industrial revolution has pushed countries to an environmental and population crisis. This essay discussed how Sri Lanka would face challenges due to its population saturation and suggested that it should plan and build new cities and invest in transportation infrastructure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41800643087 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09247204348 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549839228296 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1727386669 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.3125 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277339283272 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891000641765 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728347864462 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15793252389 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846450607818 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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