These days sports are increasingly gaining popularity as more and more people prefer learning it as a medium to stay fit and disciplined. However, cricket is slowly becoming one of the most widely played sports in the sub-continental countries even surpassing their national sports. Although, there are a plethora of reasons, in this essay we shall discuss the top two - it is very commercial and gender neutral.
To begin with, cricket has become a very commercial and they frequently have various tournaments. Cricketers namely Virat Kholi and MS Dhoni from the Indian team are given God like status and when they are playing, crowds flock to the stadium to witness the live matches or even watch it at home. Recently, the cricket match between India and Pakistan broke all records for the most views in the world. Increase in viewership helps the telecasting channel to monetize as well as the products advertised during intervals experience a spike in their sales.
Furthermore, cricket is gender unbiased and easy to play as one does not require very fancy equipment. Additionally, many sports centers are now mainly focusing on providing step by step training and guidance to women who are the major chunk of their students. To exemplify, when India's women cricket team won the World Cup many females were encouraged and inspired to play. Cricket is not considered a violent sports and hence can be comfortably played by all.
To summarize, I would like to recapitulate that irrespective of the popularity all sports should be given equal importance and publicity. While cricket is loved far and wide, national sports should not be forgotten.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'sport'.
Suggestion: sport
These days sports are increasingly gaining popularity as ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, while, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11439114391 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77149315495 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634686346863 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0709273127 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.615384615 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206470880541 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701179084848 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580519978052 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126096422099 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705984338743 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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