CRIME
CRIME
Crime is undoubtedly increasing in an alarming way; especially among children under 18 years. This is mainly because of the over exposure to social media; and the most viable solution is to rehabilitate the young criminals and guide them in the right direction.
Now-a-days, influence of media affects children in a negative way; especially when parents do not have time to take care or guide their son or daughter. This has resulted in an increase in the number of juvenile delinquencies - ranging from harming to killing- without realising the seriousness of their actions. For example, James Bulger -an infant- was mudered by two boys when they were hardly 10 years old. Evenif they were not very well aware of the consequences, it is an irreparable loss for the victim-Jame’s parents.
Considering the age of the criminals, they should be rehabilitated and allowed to lead a normal life, after imprisonment. While in prison, they should be made aware of their mistakes -the consequences of the misdeeds carried out by them- to ensure they do not pose a threat to the society anymore. As per a recent survey conducted in the United Kingdom; those who have carried out serious offences -like crime- leading normal life has increased by 59% in the last 2 years.
In conclusion, crime is a serious offence, and should be handled wisely - through rehabilitation and counselling- thus helping them to enjoy their life as good citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
CRIME Crime is undoubtedly increasing in an a...
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Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an alarming way" with adverb for "alarming"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ME Crime is undoubtedly increasing in an alarming way; especially among children under 18 yea...
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Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ys, influence of media affects children in a negative way; especially when parents do not have ti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07949790795 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9142635921 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640167364017 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0213714355 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.4 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164838633368 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713115107028 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124703677223 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951348782325 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624828879819 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.