People always want to make their living condition is better in any way. That reason why the main purpose of residents in rural areas is to have a job in big cities. In there, they can be satisfied their requirements in education, health, communication, social relation and get many good occasion. In contrast, they have to face many kinds of crime or even being a crime.
There are two main reasons that make them do the crime. The first one is for the positive reason, people lack money, took their mistake when spending too much money on a bet, do not care about the consequence after they did crime, illegal things. Then they tried to put all effort to improve the difficulties but they can not return. Once being a crime, people are easy to redo what made them be the crime before. This statement comes from a research about crime in England. The second one is that they do not want to be a crime but somehow it is suddenly made them do that crime like charge in many duties in their family. The main cause of those reasons is that the crime does not respect to law and government even crime is begin from somewhere in government.
In the rural area, if the crime exists here, mean that this region is really important with their illegal work such as in the border. If else, they are in a small group who takes advantage of low level in there to maintain what they do. In comparison between two regions, obviously, in urban have much higher than rural but in my opinion, rural is a main source of crime in urban. For instance, the teenager in the country who do not care about education, improve their self as well as they do not have a good background like family's condition, good relationship, clear direction to create a bright future. Then they will be easy to follow that make them become richer, stronger, and forget their worse past. Hence, being a crime is easier than being a good worker. On the other hand, as mentioned above, they leave to a big city without strong spirit to bear with the difficult coming. Finally, they run in a faster way to earn money: crime.
So, the question is we can reduce the crime rate. a long time ago, many big cities tried their method to improve this problem, but the common is to make people respect the rule and scare it. Secondary, increasing education level over the country seems to be the best way to reduce crime. Third, as far as you know, in Iceland or Sweden or Japan crime rate is really low, even police have nothing to do in their working day. Because with high-level economic where the government can provide almost what resident needs: free education, high living condition, all people have a well-fit job lead to reduce conflict in society. But the most important is in your mind. you have to protect to every crime come by your self and always think how to make your life bright in right way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, really, second, so, then, third, well, for instance, in contrast, such as, you know, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2342.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 522.0 315.596192385 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48659003831 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25905854673 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 176.041082164 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492337164751 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 742.5 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5984964458 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0769230769 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.19230769231 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335516951027 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100681040434 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747522283187 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205220264166 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035610709322 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.