In this contemporary society, the crime rate is inclining with a great pace. However, this rate is always found to be higher in urban areas as compared to that of rural ones. This essay will discuss the reasons why is it so and put forward solution to it.
The major reason behind the rise in offence rate in cities is the inability among people in order to earn their necessities as it is hard for them to survive in towns and make their both ends meet because of its expensiveness. And to do so, they require earning a lot of money which is possible only through unfair means. However, it is not the same in case of rural people as they are able to cope up even with the worse living conditions and live a sustainable life by spending a little money on everything they need. For instance, it can be clearly seen from news published in the newspaper that criminals generally commit crime in multipolitan cities to earn their living while the same rate is gradually low in villagers. That is why; offence rate is more in cities whereas less in countryside.
However, tackling this issue involves proper steps that government needs to take. For example, the prices need to be fixed for household items, whether for cities or villages. In addition, like villagers, the food items should be distributed to the city-accommodates as well. Thus, government authorities need to take a strict action in order to reduce the crime.
In conclusion, this essay argued the reason why the crime rate is more in cities and towns than their outskirts. In my opinion, until efforts are made this problem will escalate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6914893617 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62444170843 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9823851641 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209448775134 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744464619606 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707949439902 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132964218307 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524820789563 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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